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it's those summer walks alone that bring me the most joy the poignant sky slow kissing the ocean blushing into little pink splashes before the waves build and crash cascading over rocky barriers the endless miles of beach unexplored by anyone since the tide had receded my prints, fresh, fading behind me faster than i can walk the little clusters of its bottom litter the edge awaiting the next rip current to carry it back out while a flock of gulls runs along trying to pick through this rubbish for an easy meal before its gone again the air teases the senses with scents of new and old, familiar, unfamiliar, pleasant, unpleasant, mixed together yet it becomes a pleasure somehow the endless ebb and flow and the unexplained roar have a melancholy feel like a song you never heard you can feel the beat and hum along without words....

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Date: 3/21/2020 11:11:00 PM
As always such a rich treasury of images and I like the formatting of the stanza lines. Congratulations my friend! Stay well. Many blessings!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 3/24/2020 8:57:00 AM
Thank you so much Sam... stay safe... hugs and blessings :)
Date: 2/14/2016 10:55:00 PM
You know, I actually think I might like this more than your other beach poem! Such vivid descriptions that take me into this scene that you paint. The most accurate was the song you never heard, but yet can still hum along, without words. How true, in my experiences with the ocean!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/18/2016 11:27:00 AM
thank you...i couldn't decide which i liked, but after 2 years of silence from my muse i was just happy to write something...hugs
Date: 2/11/2016 10:09:00 PM
Hi Sandra,, Congrats on your "Sea Shore win." LINDA
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Date: 2/11/2016 4:28:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write Sandra!
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Date: 2/10/2016 11:35:00 PM
A lovely write, Sandra, reminds me of my selfishness when I am at the sea shore- I want it all to myself. Well done. Viv x
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Date: 2/10/2016 8:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this awesome poem. You took me back to my walks on the beach. TY!
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Date: 2/10/2016 5:08:00 PM
Sandra, congrats on your placement in the contest!! *Smiles* -luloo
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Date: 2/4/2016 9:57:00 AM
Poignant and melancholy is the feeling that the seashore transmits to me when I look at it while on a deserted beach. Through your descriptive imagery you too manage to mirror my same feelings. This is a lovely entry...best of luck in the contest. // paul
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Paul Callus
Date: 2/11/2016 5:37:00 AM
>>>back with congratulations, Sandra...well done!!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/4/2016 10:39:00 AM
i agree with you...perhaps that's why i love being there alone at sunrise best of all! good luck to you as well :) thank you for your visit and kind comment!
Date: 2/3/2016 9:20:00 PM
oh, I am so jealous. If this is for seashore contest. I don't even have time to work on it. DANG. This is gorgeous.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/4/2016 9:40:00 AM
thank you my dear friend...the first one i wrote, in my opinion was a bit rusty so i wrote another!
Date: 2/3/2016 6:47:00 PM
the beauty nature brings, lovely write Sandra @-> LINDA <-@
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/4/2016 9:42:00 AM
thank you...i love the shore...even alone, you don't ever quite feel alone! best time to walk the beach though, is sunrise without others around...it allows you to really see the beauty!
Date: 2/3/2016 12:15:00 AM
There can be only one Sandra Adams who writes like this, so beautifully in free verse. This lovely poem transported me into nature itself. Picturesque perfect! #7
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 2/4/2016 7:40:00 PM
That is wonderful. We have missed you!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/3/2016 3:45:00 AM
thank you so much Connie...I have missed you all and my muse is starting to clear her throat and sing again :)
Date: 2/2/2016 11:11:00 PM
Hello, Sandra, you write beautifully. The imagery is perfect. This is why you are a poet. You were missed all of 2014 and 15. I hope this means you are going to return. Always ~SKAT~
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/3/2016 3:51:00 AM
Thank you Skat, you are too kind and were missed as well! I am here to find inspiration and stick around...even thinking of becoming a premium member! Hugs

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