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Attracting Opposites

Attracting Opposites Drowning death in summers night Saddened sorrows of sheer delight Toxic tears of cascading falls Abandoned Angels in satin shawls Disenchanted dreams in the waking morn Hurting hearts of Love's first born Crucified cries of joyful tears Decadent decisions of youthful years Manic madness of a beautiful brain Barytic blood of the sweet sugarcane Schizoid shadows against the white washed walls Angered appetites in the money making malls Withered wills of the sound of mind Demon dwelling in the kindred kind Warring words in a “peace” of pie Dubious denial in the ultimate high. Dec.30.2016 CONTEST 255 any form, any topic max of 28 lines - Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Date: 12/31/2016 10:16:00 AM
Hey, WW, an occasional trip "down the rabbit hole" can have a very cathartic effect. A nice double bladed expose. I particularly liked the "Abandoned angels in satin shawls". The cadence and rhyme added to the sharpness of the differences.
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