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With the onset of years erstwhile crazy ideas abandoned with caution and dread now crowd my mind no peace I will find till my conscience lies neatly in shreds Conscience, out the way there's hell to pay for too long I've toed the line Ms Goody Two-Shoes who never once boozed longs to taste the fruit of the vine Since exiting the womb no breathing room another's cousin, sister or daughter later in life mother and wife now breaking free to taste the sweet water Once meek and restrained willingly chained missed out on the pleasures of life no fun to be had not a chance at being bad as a dutiful mother and wife Inch by sure inch my conscience I'll lynch spread my wings which were hitherto clipped down with taboos I'll expose my tattoos and enjoy my first skinny dip I dream of a match to telly dispatched on the streak my clothes I'll abort displaying my tattoos and unmentionables too and a full frontal view before caught No doubt you'd agree my earlier poetry has a somewhat conservative ring conscience, step aside you've my freedom denied readers, prepare for smut on a string Though passionately aflame this steri-clean dame aims in the heart zone to practice due care though my conscience'll be dead of all life been bled I'll draw the line at illicit affairs

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/10/2014 1:54:00 PM
delsia...love the attitude with which you wrote...I'm sure there are others than can relate as I..well done...kudos kj
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Date: 12/18/2013 6:36:00 PM
LOL well a girl has to have fun sometime, I wore my first thong bikini in my 50's :PLight & Love
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Date: 8/31/2013 7:28:00 PM
Odd how I've never caught the conservative ring in your earlier poetry lol. What I have caught though, is the bug for it. Take care, Richard
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Date: 8/16/2013 3:13:00 AM
:-) pd
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Date: 8/14/2013 2:48:00 PM
Interesting work...I am sure that it would have been in the winners' list.Sara
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Date: 8/14/2013 3:11:00 AM
another well-woven thread of wonderful verse! Terry
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Date: 8/13/2013 10:24:00 PM
very excellent write deary sista <3 thank you for sharing your brilliant thought :) enjoyed much :) Sk
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Date: 8/12/2013 11:03:00 PM
Ah creative freedom, an river of attitude we all need to dive into and go with the flow, nicely penned. Blessings, Carl
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Date: 8/12/2013 10:13:00 AM
I am just beside myself with these very energetic lines. This was like reading a very entertaining reality check. Fantastic!
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Date: 8/11/2013 4:12:00 PM
Great poem he girl you are not bad, cause the bad don't it. the way you do it an'it nothing to it. Sorry you missed the dead line. for sure you would have won.. ... Lucilla
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Date: 8/5/2013 11:24:00 AM
Delycia, you certainly pep up the soup which has otherwise turned rather dull of late!!
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Date: 8/3/2013 7:38:00 PM
It's good that you have a limit. It's funny how culture does clip our wings. I guess it's meant to do that. Some are affected more than others by norms. At least you are being true to yourself now. Be careful and good trespass! This is extremely funny and meaningful. Thank-you so much for your kind and generous comments. You make this place far better than it would be without you!!!!
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Date: 8/3/2013 3:13:00 PM
Cute one..Enjoyed reading your taboo work..Thanks for stopping by..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara
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Date: 8/2/2013 6:17:00 PM
Passionate, daring, and sexy. nicely done
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Date: 7/30/2013 7:01:00 PM
Your poem was both witty and entertaining.This is just the kind of poem that can make a dull moment seem bright.
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Date: 7/29/2013 5:14:00 PM
back to say hi, hope you are having a good day.
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Date: 7/28/2013 1:51:00 PM
I sure everybody was happy that you were late too. Wow, I love this poem poet.
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Date: 7/28/2013 12:53:00 PM
your clever delivery is not only amusing but also classic... what a greeat ride, delysia..:) huggs
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Date: 7/27/2013 4:41:00 PM
dropping by to say hello.
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Date: 7/26/2013 12:37:00 AM
gosh, you should have entered it in my funny contest. This was the kind i wanted in the long poems I received!!
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Date: 7/25/2013 6:29:00 PM
Hello! delysia hendricks Nice ine here with it's fine message to perceive. That said words like ( and, The) would be better omitted, They are losing - when your poem was not entered - I'm happy I have had that chance to Read, also review your Poetry. Thank You Perry C.
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Date: 7/25/2013 5:56:00 PM
Wow, nicely done. Great flow and rhyme. Full of humor, yet, somehow I think, perhaps full of truth, as well. At least a little truth, hey? This was very entertaining and great insight to your soul. From one goody-two-shoes to another - I've enjoyed shedding my clothes for a skinny dip in my recent, decadent absence-of-youth years myself. Freedom is nice to explore. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 7/25/2013 1:10:00 PM
Your a wonderful poet,, Delysia, thanks for the expression, and the warning... :-) :-). LINDA
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Date: 7/25/2013 11:26:00 AM
GIRL.....HEE HEE! I can relate to SOOOOOOOO MUCH HERE! Goodie Two Shoes indeed! Girl...skinny dipping....only had the courage for the floaties to float...only with hubby around and yet.....SO LIBERATING!!!!!! A DREAM! BTW....got him to try something naughty in the changing rooms as well! YEA.....GO WILD! Ok...Just wanted to tell you...your last post on my latest poem...ARE YOU FREAKING KIDDING ME???? Have you read one of your own poems lately! YOU ROCK!!!! You go, girlfriend! HUGS!
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Date: 7/25/2013 9:04:00 AM
HI Delysia , creative and beautiful poem was captivated from the get go. *smiles* Ron
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