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Attic living The echo of wine is sadness, jokes told are not funny and laughter is a bronchial cough. Mirth gone when Sunday is despondent, an autumnal leaf that drags itself along a clammy asphalt road. Wrinkled faces framed by nylon shawls, hesitate by church steps as wanting to hear more words of everlasting love; before going home to empty rooms and dripping kitchen taps. October drizzle on Sunday´s best, bat wings open up and the murmur of the future less is a dying repeat; as the padre smokes a cigar in the vestry, wine has lost its glow.

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Date: 4/21/2013 8:49:00 AM
Dear Jan - Got the tears flowing on a beautiful Sunday here. Another lovely descriptive: "laughter is a bronchial cough." The grave seem not so bad with this hint waiting in the wings. love, Kathy
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Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 4/21/2013 2:43:00 PM
thank you dear

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