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Attention

come, quiet my body it speaks in loud tones calls upon you sings and shouts for your attention thighs clash to be seen arms string, strung riff by air penetrating riff come, quiet my body with a lullaby from your body, whisper me hush give me soft, pleasing attention

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Date: 11/3/2020 3:16:00 AM
Nice... Nice piece
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Date: 8/23/2016 8:20:00 PM
I can't be positive, but I don't think you are speaking the language of guitar ! But I love the metaphoric riff this plays with the mind ! :)
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Mark Anthony Cotterman
Date: 8/24/2016 5:34:00 PM
Smiling here! Am all about the metaphoric riffs :) Thank you for such a wonderful review Carrie.

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