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Attempting Freedom

Free to be an owl- Nightmarish clues at dawn- The sunrise 'death distorting A kind and lonely soul. Free to kill for hunger In moonlight's smiling poison. The lasting dream re-occurring A hummingbird in prison. Free to be mysterious- Lethal games with mice. Repulsing limbs accusing The need to throw the dice. The blinds are shut forever, Maternal instincts cry. Free to kill the echo... The bird will ever fly?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/21/2010 10:49:00 AM
Congratulations Iolanda on your win in Constance's mini blog contest "Beautiful Bird". Thank you for your kind comments always. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/20/2010 5:13:00 PM
Congratulations to winning 10th in the mini blog contest Beautiful Birds, very well written and expressed~~ and congrats also for the HM in Dane Ann's contest~~
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Date: 7/6/2010 6:58:00 AM
Congrats Iolanda on your HM in the freedom and liberty contest with this outstanding write.. enjoy your very special honor my friend.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" still in Hawaii till July 11th.. AlohA
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Date: 7/6/2010 4:28:00 AM
Congratulations Iolanda on your win in Dane Ann's contest "Liberty and Freedom to Choose". Love, Carol
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Date: 5/13/2010 2:55:00 PM
Good luck in the contest, Ioland...Jimmy
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Date: 5/13/2010 3:17:00 AM
Spell binding write excellent entry for the contest. Good luck.
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Date: 5/13/2010 3:01:00 AM
Looks like a winner. Good luck
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