Attain

As the yellow sun climbs in the sky Reaching heights unattained by I Inspiring to attain A better person before I die Let the worse character traits fly Let good in me remain Rime Couee' sort of

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James Peranteau

Date: 8/28/2015 8:59:00 AM

Sort of ???... Your message is loud and clear dear poet ! This is one of the reasons your's truly has spent the years developing the poet who once was burried deep within this pneuma...sharing is to some the simple ink of poetry, yet for myself, it is the integral...you display this quality throught your writes...the reason I come to you ! Have a brilliant weekend Sara....much love, james

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/27/2015 2:08:00 PM

A beautiful and deep poem Sara... I like the way you end the poem... LINDA

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/27/2015 1:35:00 PM

such an honest, beautiful verse, sara...much enjoyed.. huggs