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"I'm bleeding do you think you can patch me up? oh the ceiling is starting to spin around and around and this feeling my arms are tingling hating and seething i think that i am panicking! Attack an Attack my body turns on me i can't react the world is falling all around me An attack an Attack my face is numb soon i'll hit the ground and no one's going to save me any how. Breathing is shallow much like a wave put me on a stretcher and carry me so far away the thoughts in my head are starting to race my body is seizing i think i'm panicking... Attack an Attack my body turns on me i can't react this world is falling all around me An attack an Attack my face is going numb soon i'll hit the ground cuz no one's here to save me any how. Panic attack an attack an attack panic attack panic attack!"

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Date: 11/14/2016 6:19:00 PM
This perfectly describes a panic attack on many levels. Brilliant verse. It even distills that feeling while reading it (as if the reader can sympathize with the pain of the writer). Thanks for sharing!! -JWE
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Date: 8/20/2014 6:32:00 PM
I can relate to this poem. I could feel every movement as if I was there
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Antonio Swider
Date: 8/20/2014 6:35:00 PM
yeah it comes straight from experience. i posted a few new ones tonight too. thank you so much
Date: 8/14/2014 9:40:00 PM
Antonio, stopping by to read and enjoy your poem once again. :) Congratulations, on having your poem featured on the Poetry Soup's Home Page..... Always & Forever ~LINDA
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Antonio Swider
Date: 8/20/2014 6:28:00 PM
thank you so much!!!
Date: 8/12/2014 11:59:00 AM
This kind of battle just isn't good. Love it and can relate to it.
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Antonio Swider
Date: 8/20/2014 6:28:00 PM
thank you
Date: 8/12/2014 9:33:00 AM
war is no good..like this
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Antonio Swider
Date: 8/20/2014 6:29:00 PM
war is a real bad thing..
Date: 8/6/2014 10:50:00 PM
THANK YOU FOR THE REPLY
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Antonio Swider
Date: 8/20/2014 6:30:00 PM
anytime! thank you for reading me
Date: 8/1/2014 1:32:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Antonio :) - I choose your first very well written rhyme poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Antonio Swider
Date: 8/20/2014 6:29:00 PM
thank you. i def will
Date: 7/31/2014 12:27:00 AM
I like your out spoken poem Antonio,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ @-> LINDA <-@
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Antonio Swider
Date: 7/31/2014 7:14:00 AM
thank you so much. i will definately check it out

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