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She took the last beer Without asking Not caring if he was interested Her priority was her third Her third beer of the morning After all she was on vacation What could we do She’d made her choice With mouths agape We all stood there And saw her choose the bottle Over allegedly the love of her life Atta Girl… May you both be happy You and your beer AP: Honorable Mention 2020, Honorable Mention 2020 Posted on September 17, 2019

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Date: 9/18/2019 10:03:00 AM
Nice write. Enjoyed this. Good strong theme.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 9/18/2019 2:51:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Eric.

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