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Atonement

My Lord... I, the ill-fated, the scythe-bearing wind, ask for forgiveness instead of death. You do know that what I say is diurnal, don’t you? Sibyl Herophile died prophesying their end not mine. I am hovering within your hands, breathing from your own lungs. I beg of you, forget the red prison house. I fear, My Lord. Beckon me. I no longer chant your hymns. I have forgotten my childhood prayers. Ramming in secular injustice I seek my own sunrise. In the affected I seek the authentic, I cry to you, My Lord. But then again, if you by judgment find me dishonorable, I beg of you, in secret bury me. Kill me by giving me the most unfavorable criticism. Lay me to rest in a huge mound of sun dust. In you I trust, My Lord.

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Date: 8/20/2016 3:20:00 PM
Miltos, this prayer is magnificent! Congratulations on your top win! : ) 7
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Date: 8/24/2016 3:40:00 PM
I am very happy. I did not expect this place in the competition. Thank you very much...
Date: 8/18/2016 5:06:00 PM
Miltos, beautiful prayer and poem...congrats on your well deserved top placement :)-luloo
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Date: 8/19/2016 1:56:00 AM
Thank you very much. Your words give me strength to follow . I will happy to see you and the next days ...
Date: 8/18/2016 2:57:00 PM
Thank you so very much for such an inspiring prayer, Miltos. Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/18/2016 4:19:00 PM
I'm so glad you liked it , I would be happy to talk about poetry .
Date: 8/9/2016 4:01:00 AM
A heartfelt prayer, a deeply tormented voice coming alive via strong diction. Great poem, Miltos.
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Date: 8/9/2016 2:55:00 PM
Thank you from my heart, I am happy you liked. Actually this poem written as a prayer ...
Date: 8/8/2016 10:41:00 PM
Miltos, Congratulations on your awesome win. Stop by and enjoy my latest blog "It's Over." always & forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 8/9/2016 2:54:00 PM
Once again thank you very much for your kind words. Be well and always creative ...

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