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Atonement

........Lightening bolt......... ................ash...............

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Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/17/2010 5:22:00 PM

whoa, sounds like somebody got zapped!! could be? congrats on the win!!

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 2/16/2010 6:01:00 AM

Congratulations Jeralynn, on your Honorable Mention in the “SPACES” poetry contest sponsored by: Brian Strand with these "striking" words. I can see why you are in the winners’ circle! Smiles, Dane Ann

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/14/2010 8:45:00 AM

GOOD, you made the list, Jeralynn. Congrats!!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/13/2010 4:43:00 AM

Jeralynn, Perfect! I am so glad to see it a winner. Congratulations! Connie

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/11/2010 7:41:00 PM

Wow! This is great, Jeralyn! My congratulations on your win in Brian's "Spaces" Contest! Peace and love, Audrey

Date: 2/11/2010 4:16:00 PM

Creative and visually interesting approach to this form. Just three words say so much. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Brian's contest. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing! Karen

James Fraser

Date: 2/11/2010 1:24:00 PM

Short, but leaves images aplenty in this fine piece, many congratulations on your success in Brian's fine contest Jeralynn >> James

Mac Mcgovern

Date: 2/11/2010 10:47:00 AM

Conratulations on your win. For us desiring cremation, it is cheaper. Mac

Joyce Johnson

Date: 2/11/2010 10:38:00 AM

Congratulations. So much in so few. Love, Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/11/2010 8:33:00 AM

Congrats on your winning poem in the Spaces contest.. an amazing write for an amazing win.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/11/2010 8:05:00 AM

Oh my....how did I miss this amazing poem?? Great job, Jeralynn!! Congratulations on this meaningful poem, said in three words! Wow! Love, Carrie

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 2/11/2010 5:14:00 AM

yesiree Jeralynn!! lol . I will always remember this one! Congratulations on both counts! Love it ! heehheee!-Robert

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/11/2010 3:28:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's Contest Jeralynn. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/11/2010 2:39:00 AM

I love the irony in the title. Great imagism, Jeralynn. Congratulations on your success! Love, Carolyn

Raul Moreno

Date: 2/11/2010 1:30:00 AM

Jeralynn, congrats on your success in Brian's contest...Raul

Brian Strand

Date: 2/11/2010 12:46:00 AM

Congrats on your success in my contest Jeralyn.Rgds Brian.My latest contest 'SPORT'S MAD ?' is now open.

Colleen Bono

Date: 2/8/2010 7:33:00 PM

Nice one.Please read IT"S A BOY.I have been a little busy the last few days.When you read my letter you will know why.Hope all is well with you.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/7/2010 3:46:00 PM

Great Imagism for I could go all kinds of ways with this one. Keep the creative pen flowing. If this ifor the contest it should do well. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara

Date: 2/7/2010 2:11:00 PM

Creative use of this short form. Much said in just three words. Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing. Karen

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/7/2010 1:33:00 PM

wowser!!!! ZAPPPPPPPPPPPpppppppp I see you like Lace poems..;) have you read mine? Black Lace...Light & Love (adultish verse)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/7/2010 9:56:00 AM

This is a good entry, Jeralynn. Good luck in Brian's contest, and thanks so much for your comments on my poem. LUv, Andrea

Brian Strand

Date: 2/7/2010 12:35:00 AM

Thank you for supporting my contest Jeralynn.Rgds Brian