Atmospheric Perspective

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Poetic Form: Suzette Prime

Inspired: 2023 December 05

*1st Place*
Any theme Any form
Contest Judged: 2023 December 07
Sponsored by: Sotto Poet

Image: N/A

I painted a purple sky Looked at it I thought it looked brown Like the ground So I painted trees on it And a stream The stream overflowed And the trees floated away In a purple sky

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/7/2023 8:00:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. What a wonderful story/write in a few lines. Love It... Have a wonderful day with your win...............

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/7/2023 8:05:00 PM

Thank you so much, Paula. Blessings to you always, my friend. Aloha, William

Silent One

Date: 12/7/2023 1:43:00 PM

Great imagery in this one.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest.

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/7/2023 3:21:00 PM

Yea, another shot in the dark--thanks, Silent One. Aloha, William

Sotto Poet

Date: 12/7/2023 9:14:00 AM

Congratulations on your 1st place contest win, with this thought-provoking atmosphere perspective poem.

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/7/2023 10:19:00 AM

Thank you, Lasaad, on this positive note. Aloha, William