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At Your Grave

Silence: All I hear when I call out your name. Snow envelops me and snuffs out my flame. Gone is the light with which your name can be read, I think I hear you, but it's all in my head. I'm deep in the woods where no songs can be heard. I am the only one here, and I speak but four words.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/26/2012 12:22:00 PM
Lovely in a dark kind of way. Keep writing on -Lily <3
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Date: 12/6/2011 8:24:00 AM
Nicely done my friend. There is much sadness in this piece. A very poignant write. God Bless, JB
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Date: 12/1/2011 9:46:00 PM
Another interesting poem. Would like to know what the four words are!
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Date: 11/27/2011 4:18:00 PM
I like this Daniel it is sad but it paints deep visuals. Beautiful thank you Lizzie!
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Date: 11/25/2011 10:41:00 PM
Danile, hi,, a very errie thought... still it reads well and deep... thank you for sharing...p.d.
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