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Let me at first sight split in your eyes To see the look you will wear on your face. Let me seize foods and fruits from your gullet For three morning and night To see your mood in this condition Let me empty your purse to water and sands To look up to your disdain temper of insatiable. Let me pressurize you under the sun To see how vengeance discomfort your heart will beat Let me knife you a wound on your body To witness your impatient state. Let me axed your wound To hear what your mouth will pronounce. Will it upon these tortures and treatments Withstand to sonorously call her name? Or will it renounce her name to a worthless measurement? Endless is a love that never resist all odds; Fall-out is a weakling love Which waits only in all good accord.

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Date: 2/18/2014 10:47:00 PM
What a poem! Great write! I can relate in a way! :) Good, real good write!
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Date: 2/17/2014 4:13:00 AM
Well... Well... Enchanting - that's all I have to state... Good write Abdul!
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Date: 7/7/2013 9:58:00 AM
Good Morning, Abdulhafeez, -CONGRATULATIONS!!! on the 5th poem theme contest. always & forever * Linda
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Date: 7/5/2013 3:52:00 PM
Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 7/5/2013 2:10:00 PM
Congrats on your win very deep and filled with emotions. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 7/4/2013 6:44:00 PM
This win was well deserved...COngrats... Jake
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Date: 7/3/2013 11:20:00 PM
Congratulations, ABDULHAFEEZ :-) A wonderful 5th poem. thank you for choosing my contest........ ............. LOVE * SKAT
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