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At the Zoo

At the zoo you will find animals of all kinds: Lions, tigers, bears, elephants and kangaroos. Oh! What fun to see! Hey, look! That monkey looks just like you!

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Date: 6/27/2016 2:20:00 PM
Love the last lines, but don't you think you insulted the poor monkey by comparing him to someone you know? Haha. Thank you for stopping by. / M
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Kim Merryman
Date: 7/4/2016 4:05:00 PM
Thanks, Maurice! I didn't think about insulting the monkey. Poor monkey!
Date: 6/20/2015 6:24:00 PM
this is adorable. didn't it make the winners' list. I really like it!!
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/20/2015 8:36:00 PM
Actually it was never in a contest but I did refer to it as an example for my waltz wave contest. I'm glad you liked it, Andrea! Thanks for stopping by. I always appreciate your comments.
Date: 6/19/2015 1:39:00 AM
Very nice pen Kim! It was fun to read it dear friend.Very cute!:)A 7! Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light!God bless you!:) D.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/20/2015 8:38:00 PM
Thank you, Dorian and I'm glad you enjoyed it. Wishing you a lovely weekend also! Love, Kim
Date: 6/13/2015 8:36:00 PM
That's a good one, Kim. This is a tricky and of course, enjoyable format.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/18/2015 8:25:00 PM
Thanks, David!
Date: 6/11/2015 9:32:00 PM
Hi Kim, this poem made me laugh at its ending. Very cute!
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Date: 6/11/2015 10:43:00 AM
A fountain of fun phases that bring humor and magic to the page. A well written waltz. Emile. #7
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/11/2015 9:02:00 PM
Thank you, Emile! I felt like being silly!
Date: 6/11/2015 10:04:00 AM
HOHO!! THIS IS AMZING!! I LOVED IT!! :D :D
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/11/2015 9:01:00 PM
So glad you liked it, Sneha! I was just being silly when I wrote it. Thanks for stopping by!
Date: 6/10/2015 7:16:00 AM
Kim, loving the waltzing wave in your sweet poem, well done 7, and thanks for the inspiration
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/11/2015 8:59:00 PM
Thank you, Constance!
Date: 6/9/2015 8:41:00 PM
G'day Kim... be careful its not a mirror you're looking at. Yes, a zoo is a fun place to be - thanks Kim - Lindsay
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/11/2015 8:57:00 PM
Ha! Ha! Thanks for stopping by, Lindsay!
Date: 6/9/2015 11:15:00 AM
giggling here, kim... you're so funny!.. huggs
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/11/2015 8:53:00 PM
Thanks, Nette! Just being silly!
Date: 6/9/2015 10:05:00 AM
You made me giggle Kim....lovely Tim
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/9/2015 10:44:00 AM
Thanks for commenting, Tim! I was just being silly with this one.
Date: 6/9/2015 1:19:00 AM
ha ha ha love the ending Kim:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/9/2015 10:45:00 AM
Thanks, Jan! I was just being silly with this one.

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