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At the Seaside

I lingered by the seaside on a cold and frosty morning, The dark clouds overhead were billowing out a warning Feeling them calling to me in a manner of some gloom. That I would be better off watching them from my room. I aimed to linger longer so took no notice of the clouds. An imposing storm would surely keep away the crowds. I gleefully watched the tiny sand crabs scurry to and froe, Sensing the storm coming, weren’t sure which way to go. I casually lingered up the stairs that led to the main street, There I spied the ice-cream shop, decided to have a treat. Flavour would me a momentous decision. It took a while. Now which, Banana Rama or Choc Cherry made me smile. Enjoying my cone, I lingered on watching folk all scatter. Rain by now was pouring down, to me it didn’t matter. Many were in the little café, no doubt they took refuge. Looking over to the sea, the waves now were really huge. Thunder crashed and lightning flashed, the rain fell down. I lingered slowly under awnings to the other side of town. Watched cars slowing down and splash in a puddle or two. I lingered further, might as well I had nothing better to do.

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Date: 7/25/2023 1:40:00 AM
This narrative of how you spent your day is intriguing, Merv, congratulations:)
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Merv Hold
Date: 7/30/2023 5:49:00 PM
Thank you Joanna
Date: 7/21/2023 9:38:00 AM
Merv, wonderful poem and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge L Words !
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Merv Hold
Date: 7/21/2023 2:34:00 PM
Thank you Constance
Date: 7/21/2023 2:57:00 AM
An interesting easeful linkering story very beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/21/2023 2:35:00 PM
Thank you Christuraj.
Date: 7/20/2023 2:19:00 PM
- A lovely poem, Mery ... congratulations on your win :) - hugs
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Date: 7/21/2023 2:35:00 PM
Thank you Anne Lise
Date: 7/19/2023 11:14:00 AM
Banana Rama ice-cream sounds Yum Merv. A lovely poem BOL in the contest. Best wishes SV
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Merv Hold
Date: 7/21/2023 2:34:00 PM
Thank you Speaks

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