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"at the Sea"

At the sea, Sunday Clear and breeze, total Ease, dress up to knees Totally fun day Families here, cheer Excitement rise By Mother's side Don't come Monday Let continue Fun, fun day Come on wave Wash away Stress go By the Sea

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Mac Mcgovern

Date: 2/20/2010 4:32:00 PM

A beautiful work Sara. I remember these wonderful days by the sea (less the dress), and how much fun they were. Ah, to leave all the everyday ills behind and relive again. Mac

Lucinda Bulger

Date: 2/20/2010 7:07:00 AM

beautifully written Sara, nice simple flow makes one think of such fun, the simplicities... :) Nice morning read. Miss Cindy

Skat A

Date: 2/19/2010 7:57:00 PM

MAN I LOVE THIS POEM..IT SO..RELAXING A PLACE I LIKE TO GO TO BE STRESS FREE...I.T.

James Fraser

Date: 2/18/2010 12:50:00 PM

Looks like a nice day all round, down at the beach >> kool piece Sara >> James

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/18/2010 6:04:00 AM

enjoyed reading, would be nice to go to the sea, for a visit.

Gert W. Knop

Date: 2/17/2010 5:33:00 AM

Very nice entry for the contest, Sara! Sometimes I am really missing the sea, its odor and murmur! Thank you for sharing and for your comments..Gert

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/16/2010 7:39:00 PM

A wonderful entry for the contest.. good luck if so .. enjoyed this seaside adventure .. thankxxx for your special and kind comments on my poetry today.. Sara.. so appreciated and uplifting too.. luv.. Linda-Marie

Simone Segal

Date: 2/16/2010 11:26:00 AM

Lovely poem, I live by the sea, and yes it's great to let one's stress go! thank you for your comment, love Simone

Jared Pickett

Date: 2/16/2010 8:35:00 AM

I have yet to write in this form... May see one of these in my Random Thoughts collection.... Well written.....:JP]

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/16/2010 4:39:00 AM

This is a description of a painting, "At the Seashore" by Edward Potthast (l857-1927/American) Oil on Canvas on Board. It reminded me of a few times that I as a mother have been to the ocean not prepared for the children to go into the water and we rolled up pants and waded. Sara