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At the Restaurant

In a warm restaurant interior Lazing away, coffee in hand A hot form sitting across, a platter of fruits My heart skipped a beat, as she lifted her fork, A berry making its way, unto her luscious mouth Gentle a bite and the juice spill, I wish to devour My chest searing hot, a sweet feel that caused Approach her close, offered a wipe She laughs in answer at my sight In awe I find the reason for her mirth a murky brown spot on white My face blushed I retire, empty cup in hand For the result of the scald on my chest was the cause. © Nadiya (5 Feb 15)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/24/2015 3:25:00 AM
A great write as always Nadiya!. Best Wishes my friend!.
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Date: 2/5/2015 6:24:00 PM
this was humorous and well told, Nadiya, using the male's perspective!
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Date: 2/5/2015 9:04:00 PM
yes Andrea...Its from a males perspective... thank you for reading my poem and for your supportive words... nad!
Date: 2/5/2015 5:43:00 PM
This is a funny story, with a great twist. Also, like the shape of the poem, Nadiya
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Date: 2/5/2015 9:02:00 PM
Thank you David... pleased that you enjoyed it... nad!
Date: 2/5/2015 4:17:00 PM
Now, that's the way it goes...a wonderful, humorous story.
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Date: 2/5/2015 9:00:00 PM
Thank you Kiser for your nice words on my poem.
Date: 2/5/2015 12:41:00 PM
You paint this scene with tact and humour, Nadiya! 5th and 6th lines are very seductive! Well done. // paul
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Date: 2/5/2015 2:11:00 PM
Thank you Paul for reading my poem and for the nice words... take care, nad!
Date: 2/5/2015 10:47:00 AM
Good one, Nadiya. I didn't expect that outcome! Loved the way you described everything. Great write, my dear. Hugs
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Date: 2/5/2015 2:07:00 PM
Thank you Eileen... a twist is always unexpected:)... Lov, nad!
Date: 2/5/2015 10:10:00 AM
Love the imagery and also find it a humourous write Nadiya:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 2/5/2015 2:05:00 PM
Thank you for reading my pen Jan.. lov
Date: 2/5/2015 7:27:00 AM
- Truly a wonderful written poem, dear Nadiya (#7 +) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/5/2015 7:29:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise for your nice words... love to read your pens... hugs!
Date: 2/5/2015 6:33:00 AM
My chest searing hot, a sweet feel that caused... first time the scald is so cool. Well done Nad. Love. My fav. A 7+++
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Date: 2/5/2015 6:41:00 AM
:):) thank you Rajat... this scene can be repeatedly seen in movies... i thought of putting it in words and this is the result... take care... nad!

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