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At the Pinnacle

Feet clamber the heights Each pair of varied cadence Eyes are on another’s feet. Scaling the stairway I focus on every step Dead set on my arrival. At the pinnacle An old man sits on a throne – He saw me and heaved his last. Standing at the top I feel old and the world turns - Down, others enjoy the climb. From the mountaintop The waters rush to the ground Seeping through bedrocks and plants. Having reached the peak I'll keep on the life cycle - Seeking for the lower ground. 9.28.14

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Date: 3/10/2015 8:16:00 PM
Then you will have become bodhisattva. I would hope that would be my choice as well. Light & Love
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 3/10/2015 8:17:00 PM
had to stop by again!
Date: 10/11/2014 4:22:00 PM
Congrad's on your win, Light & Love
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Date: 10/11/2014 10:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Hija.
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Date: 10/4/2014 11:15:00 PM
ahhh, a metaphorical one and it's very interesting. I love your originality in this challenge.
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Hija De La Luna
Date: 10/8/2014 10:01:00 PM
thank you, Andrea, for your kind words :) God bless you!
Date: 10/1/2014 5:41:00 AM
Wow fascinating mountain climber's poem and imagery! Enjoyd the view. Hey i like yor name. Whr u frm? Pls do review my latest poem too.
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Hija De La Luna
Date: 10/2/2014 7:21:00 AM
Thank You for the visit and leaving kind words! am a Filipino. Will check your poem :)
Date: 9/29/2014 9:35:00 AM
Nice take on the theme, Luna
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Date: 9/29/2014 8:55:00 AM
But what a glorious day to reach the top and enjoy the top of the mountain experience..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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