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At the Pawnshop

I was in the local pawnshop When a lovely watch I spied Just like the one my mother wore When she was my daddy's bride. She lost it in our big house fire. I remember how she cried. Mama reminisced about it Until the very day she died. I knew then that I would buy it, I simply could not turn aside. Daddy never could replace it Though I know how hard he tried. The price was truly outrageous Mom would have been horrified. My prayer is that generations Wear that golden watch with pride.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/16/2013 9:00:00 PM
what a find....I hope this is a true story!
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Date: 7/11/2013 7:00:00 PM
nice one, joyce! i enjoyed...congrats!
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Date: 7/9/2013 10:02:00 AM
Beautifully written, Congrats on your winning poem.
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Date: 7/9/2013 8:26:00 AM
Joyce enjoyed this rhyme for ''At The Pawn Shop'. Congrats on your fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 7/9/2013 5:58:00 AM
congrats on a great win Joyce
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Date: 7/9/2013 12:50:00 AM
ha I love it .... congrats all the way :-) ~SKAT~
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Date: 7/8/2013 9:48:00 PM
Hmm... Joyce. Some great lines there. Congrats on your win. Gl
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Date: 7/8/2013 7:21:00 PM
My kind of poem Joyce. congrats...BG
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Date: 7/8/2013 4:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. It seems any gifts I ever give anybody do not last long. A silver dollar I gave to my late aunt was stolen two weeks later. A doll I gave to a friend for a Christmas gift was destroyed in a fire several months later.
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Date: 7/8/2013 3:17:00 PM
Joyce, a might fun theme... congratulations in the pawn shop contest...xox~ LINDA
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Date: 7/8/2013 2:53:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 7/8/2013 12:36:00 PM
Congrats on your win, my friend, Loved always, bl
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