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At the Gold Coast

At the Gold Coast Parched and dry I stand, Waiting and recalling thirsty for your love, At the Gold Coast we met last summer, Under the blue on the sandy gold, Memories afresh Soothing winds unfold ! Your deep dark eyes that pierced into my heart Our tale of passion at first sight did start, That mighty embrace! Melting emotions with heat of breaths, Tranquillised by waves that covered by! An impulse borne away with every breath, The most generous one made me its slave, Then the tyrant in both of us well played, Skin next to my skin, thinnest air between simply slipped by, Intolerance precipitates setting my soul ablaze, Make love to me in this ancient place, Tears lost in time and beats not keeping pace, Wanderlust of my soul ends at the Gold Coast, My heavenly abode ! Written November 23rd, 2014 For contest' Make love to me in that ancient place' by Justin Bordner

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Date: 11/24/2014 7:58:00 AM
Wowzer..This is WoW.Favouriting this beauty dear friend.
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Date: 11/23/2014 1:22:00 PM
What a delight to read Upma, this Sunday evening. The images flowed beautifully, James :)
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Date: 11/23/2014 12:27:00 PM
Lovely, Dr Upma. Very sweet and sensuous. I loved that last stanza best. Hugs
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 11/23/2014 12:47:00 PM
Thnx my dear Eileen! U hv made my day sweetie !
Date: 11/23/2014 11:47:00 AM
such a luscious piece of passion, dr.upma... you sizzle!.. huggs
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 11/23/2014 12:14:00 PM
Thnx Nette! Glad u liked this one!
Date: 11/23/2014 11:37:00 AM
oh my gosh, I am seeing SUCH good poems this morning . You are my fourth fave of the day. this truly is one of your best ever.
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 11/23/2014 12:16:00 PM
Thnx Andrea for ur always encouraging words my dear!

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