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At the Footbridge

At The Footbridge At the footbridge where we would stand, Watching steam trains, hand in hand. The whistle blew, we shrieked with fright And waved with excitement and delight, Watching steam trains, hand in hand. As locomotives steamed into sight In rhythmic puffing, smoke, and light At the footbridge where we would stand When you were nine and I was ten. Passengers waved to us, way back then. Time passed with each passing train And we would never return again. Passengers waved to us, way back then, Two children standing hand in hand, In that past and fast fading land, When you were nine and I was ten. 23/07/2016 For 'At The Footbridge' Contest Sponsored by Julia Ward.

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Date: 7/28/2016 3:39:00 AM
Beautiful childhood memories, infecting us with nostalgia.... Congrats Barry, for your placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 7/28/2016 3:50:00 PM
Thank you very much, Teddy. Barry.
Date: 7/27/2016 9:33:00 PM
Very well done. Simple childhood pleasures and times of innocence. This one reaches out to me. It makes one feel good reading it. David in NZ
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 7/28/2016 3:50:00 PM
Thank you very much, David. Barry
Date: 7/27/2016 3:37:00 AM
Congratulations. The ongoing train of time, looking back with joy hand in hand. I like that.
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 7/27/2016 4:38:00 AM
Thank you very much, Kai. Barry.
Date: 7/27/2016 12:21:00 AM
This is a nice remembrance of childhood days and our so innocent actions. Love it, congrats! Sunita.
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 7/27/2016 4:36:00 AM
Thank you very much, Sunita. Barry.
Date: 7/26/2016 12:13:00 PM
Such a lovely nostalgic poem, Barry, but also with metaphors. Congratulations on your placement in this Premiere Contest! 7 Sandra
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 7/27/2016 4:32:00 AM
Thank you very much, Sandra, and for the +7 Barry.
Date: 7/26/2016 10:37:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful,many congrats Barry!
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 7/27/2016 4:32:00 AM
Thank you, Sara. Barry
Date: 7/23/2016 11:03:00 AM
Great rhyming poem thank you for explaining the lines I'm new to all these types I dont thing I'm ready yet, but you did it well xxx
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 7/24/2016 10:44:00 AM
Thank you, Wendy. I like to play with different rhyming schemes. Barry

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