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At the end of winter's cold And the beginning of spring While the Camellias still bloom Come to me Let's share some time Enjoy life together While the Camellias still bloom In lovely warmer weather In the garden where memories Whisper, a Camellia bud awakens That tender blossom with velvet petals Dances with grace and sun embraces Love, like Camellia's blossoms Grows slowly, nurtured by moments Like these fleeting times spent together But yet love is eternal As velvety petals unfurl, vibrant Love's ardor consumes, but is resilient Winter's winds carry sweet fragrance And of love's true commitment In this ever-changing world Let love find its place May its gentle whispers and grace Bear witness to love's evolution __in time

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Date: 2/13/2024 10:13:00 PM
A wonderful write with a vibrant flow using simple words without being pedestrian, which I also try to maintain. Particularly appreciated stanza 3. Wish the Lord showers his grace upon you and keeps you in good health.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/14/2024 5:50:00 AM
Krishnanand, I enjoyed reading your review of my work. I appreciate you telling me what you liked about it and for wishing for me showers of grace. Sara K
Date: 2/11/2024 1:35:00 PM
Very beautiful. Love the formatting too
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/14/2024 4:50:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea. I appreciate the kind review. Sara K
Date: 2/11/2024 6:32:00 AM
Wow! This is absolutely gorgeous and so beautifully woven dear sara, from the lyrical flow to the imagery and how inviting it is as you wrote “ come to me” makes this a very soulful poem. Through your words i can see velvety petals unfurl and smell the sweet fragrance that ykuv described. Stunning poem that depicts timeless love in such captivating cadence. Pleasure readin. Sendin you light always
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/11/2024 10:45:00 AM
I am so glad that you enjoyed it and gave it a wow, IE. I enjoyed writing that one. Thanks for stopping by, Sara K
Date: 2/10/2024 1:34:00 PM
love how you compared love to Camellias. Well delivered. I especially liked the last verse...words filled with wisdom Enjoy your evening, Sara B
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/10/2024 1:51:00 PM
I appreciate the kind review of my work, Sara B.I hope the evening is a good one for you as well. Sara K
Date: 2/10/2024 8:50:00 AM
Hey Sara, I hope you are well.. To me your poem is a lyrical ode to love's timeless beauty and the profound significance of shared moments amidst the splendor of nature's bounty. It invites readers to pause, reflect, and embrace the fleeting magic of love's eternal dance. I like how you formatted it also..
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/10/2024 1:50:00 PM
Thank you, SO. I am well, just getting older. Oh!! So, it is lyrical. Your visit was a delight. Sara K

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