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Below a bright cloud is where I'll find my rainbow's end near the point where two lonely rivers meet at a bend. My river waters are salty from all the tears I've spilled and his river flows from past love that was unfulfilled. Both of us are seeking to blend our waters in the deep. Both searching for long lasting love, one worthy to keep. Most rivers rush within their banks and empty into an ocean but our rivers will interlace as one, flooded with devotion. A greater prize than pot of gold, I will find in his adoring eyes, and in mine he will see the blue to brighten his morning skies. Just like the colors of a rainbow blend after stormy weather, at my rainbow's end our waters and hearts will mingle together. ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ January 20th, 2016 End of the Rainbow Contest Sponsor: Eve Roper

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Date: 2/1/2016 11:31:00 AM
Hi Lin: Congratulations on your placement!
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Date: 2/1/2016 12:07:00 PM
Thank you, Ralph.
Date: 1/26/2016 11:26:00 PM
Lin, Congratulations on your end of the rainbow win. Luv ** Skat
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Date: 1/26/2016 10:21:00 PM
Lin, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/26/2016 9:40:00 PM
Your rainbow has a happy ending, like all good stories. Congratulations. Love,Joyce
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Date: 1/26/2016 2:01:00 PM
Lovely Lin..congrats on your placement in the contest for this beautiful poem..Well written *Smiles* -luloo
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Date: 1/26/2016 4:13:00 PM
Thanks, Laura.
Date: 1/22/2016 11:20:00 AM
A well written poem for the contest. Best of luck. And thanks for reading one of mine. ~~Darlene
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Date: 1/22/2016 11:28:00 AM
Thank you so much, Darlene...and you're quite welcome.

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