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At the End of My Garden Premiere Contest Winner

There is a river at my garden end, where amongst the reeds birds sing melodious songs filling shadows, and the golden lilies float and spin. The rolling river has a murmur, on its long winding path that in time pours into the sea- the deep unknown. Rivers cannot just flow forever! But at my gardens end, I linger walking in the shallows by the shore. I feel the great pull of the current, then from the thrushes sweet ducklings drift. ________________________________ November 29, 2016 Poetry/Verse/At the End Of My Garden Copyright Protected, ID 11 853-880-29 All Rights Reserved, 2016, Constance La France Written for the Premier contest, River Line sponsor, Rick Parise, Judged 12/2016 First Place

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Date: 11/12/2021 1:43:00 AM
What a sweet write rich in imagery dear Constance... loved the last stanza specially... Hugs... ~ Ani
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Date: 11/12/2021 8:13:00 AM
Ani, thanks for the visit and the compliment, hugs ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 2/21/2017 10:14:00 AM
Lovely imagery. Congratulations on your trophy win.
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Date: 2/20/2017 6:01:00 PM
Thanks for the walk! Had me all along Congrats
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Date: 2/20/2017 7:51:00 AM
Congratulations, BW, a model piece for the topic required. A difficult contest to write for - 9 syllables when we are accustomed to 8 or 10.
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Date: 2/20/2017 4:12:00 AM
absolutely beatiful Constance :-) many congrats on your trophy a very well deserved win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/19/2017 8:53:00 PM
Just a lovely visual and a lovely surprise at the end! Congrats on your top win, Constance!
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Date: 2/19/2017 8:38:00 PM
Congratulations! 'Tis truly a beauty of a write. All the best ... CayCay
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Date: 2/19/2017 8:38:00 PM
Beautiful description - congrats on your win, Constance.
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Date: 12/1/2016 9:15:00 AM
Such a peaceful descriptive poem. Great Job!
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Date: 11/29/2016 4:43:00 PM
A fabulous poem Constance.
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Date: 11/29/2016 3:37:00 PM
ohh, h, so picturesque in its flowing beauty, this river view, constance... yes, you took me there!.. huggs
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Date: 11/29/2016 3:27:00 PM
Most enjoyable imagery transported me! I needed a sweater, but it was a crisp and delightful chill scented with nature and wild life ... CayCay
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