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At the Door of a Friend

At the Door of a Friend With footfalls heavy to this door Where I would see my friend no more What comfort could I hope for me Now you’re gone to destiny No more welcome of the hand Just empty space, a rift in sand And no more face with smile of glee That heralds informality Where will I go to search my soul Who will help me reach my goal Who will stab my selfishness Put my mind at ease, at rest Call me up with sports results Suffer my insane insults Mark me as a friend indeed Be there, in my time of need Your light was always on for me The truth I now stand here and see Those times of sheer belligerence Those wasted hours in ignorance The fallouts that we often had Those times that always felt so bad Were only testing of our strength To know what friendship really meant Opens the door, she passes note I read the words therein you wrote That scribble, that once so annoyed Is more welcome and enjoyed I smile and read how this is neat As all my words above repeat And more to know when I am gone To look and find, that light still on Written 24 April 2013 For Becca Lucas Contest; What a Friend Really Is.

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Date: 9/26/2022 11:52:00 AM
Too bad you don't write anymore. You were really talented as this gem testifies.
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Date: 6/19/2021 11:10:00 PM
far away the dead soul; far away now the best loving soul- but the memories; the happiest memories are still alive in the pot of shocked mind as wailer- it's very heart touching poetic writing for a best friend
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Date: 1/3/2014 1:58:00 AM
soupmail for you.
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Date: 11/28/2013 8:11:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this heartfelt piece again. Good morning Richard.
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Date: 7/17/2013 2:58:00 PM
I see you were asking about the Long sleep. I don't know what the artist intended for sure, but to me, the man had died in his sleep . wish I could find out if that is what the artist intended by his painting!
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Richard D Seal
Date: 7/17/2013 6:38:00 PM
Would be nce to know, I'll do some research
Date: 6/17/2013 12:08:00 AM
This is very nice indeed Richard ;}
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Date: 5/6/2013 11:52:00 PM
hey, I am seeing you got a win on this one and I had not noticed last time I came here to leave you a note. BIG congrats and I am really happy you liked my recent haiku. thanks for that. I was not sure people were "getting it."
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Date: 5/4/2013 12:33:00 PM
Reading your poem and i am in mourning myself over my best friend brother who passed away 3 weeks ago. How i do feel your pain, how much you miss him, how lonely it can get. Life is getting harder and harder to deal with many issues. You do deserve the win, congratulations. Terry xoxo
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Date: 5/1/2013 11:06:00 PM
ok, I think I remember reading your note on that food poem of mine
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Date: 5/1/2013 6:33:00 PM
Hi Richard, nice to see you on the winning list here... congrats with your friendship theme... :-(...Linda
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Date: 4/30/2013 10:51:00 AM
Love where you took this contest, Richard....Congrats!
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Date: 4/29/2013 11:07:00 PM
Heartfelt write and very unique in its way.... Kudos to its PAINTER.... Big Congrats on your win~
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Richard D Seal
Date: 4/30/2013 9:33:00 AM
Thank you AO, we all strive to be unique and of course we all are, in our way lol
Date: 4/29/2013 9:44:00 PM
Awesome Richard...congratulations
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Richard D Seal
Date: 4/30/2013 9:30:00 AM
Thank you Donna, So are you
Date: 4/29/2013 8:32:00 PM
Very heartfelt, congratulations on a great poem.
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Richard D Seal
Date: 4/30/2013 9:27:00 AM
Thanks Richard I appreciate your comment, if friendship isn't heartfelt it isn't friendship
Date: 4/29/2013 8:15:00 PM
Nicely written but very sad also. Wish we had the power to keep them safe. Congratulations. Love, joyce
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Richard D Seal
Date: 4/30/2013 9:24:00 AM
We do joyce. Thanks for the comment
Date: 4/27/2013 5:17:00 PM
Ahhh...Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Reads like winning material to me..I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve..Thanks for stopping by with congrats..Sara
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Richard D Seal
Date: 4/27/2013 6:18:00 PM
Thank you Sara, appreciate our comment
Date: 4/27/2013 9:20:00 AM
Richard; I have to say that this made me cry. It is so touching. may the light always remain on. Thanks for sharing....... Lucilla
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Richard D Seal
Date: 4/27/2013 6:14:00 PM
You're a wonderful lady and friend to me Lucilla, Thank you
Date: 4/27/2013 1:55:00 AM
Thanks for reading The Golden Standard, earlier today. I understand my views on things is at times a bit naive, due to lack of experience and years. I just wanted to say I was letting go a pile of frustrations that were building up, when I wrote that. And I've replied to both of your comments...
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Richard D Seal
Date: 4/27/2013 6:10:00 PM
That's ok Tim, we all have to let go at times
Date: 4/26/2013 2:18:00 PM
- It's written so many beautiful poems about friends this week, the best poem will win the contest - hope it will be yours Richard! - Good luck! - Have a beautifully weekend! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Richard D Seal
Date: 4/26/2013 2:29:00 PM
Thank you Anne Lise, the comment below should have gone to PD, I'm just hopeless at these boxes at mo. Thank you for the comment, I've already said Becca will struggle judging this contest, I wouldn't wonder if she's not regretting it already lol
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Richard D Seal
Date: 4/26/2013 2:18:00 PM
If you know wher to look, there always is 'someone who cares', I've found that out a few times. Thank you for the grin, my Sweet Dark Friend
Date: 4/25/2013 6:40:00 PM
Richard, this is nice lovely... she sounds like true friend, someone who will be there for you. Pick your spirit up. I love the last four lines. They remind me og the feeling... ""SOMEONE ALWAYS CARES"".... ENJOYED~ You are special to me. Always ... the forever grin~LINDA
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Richard D Seal
Date: 4/26/2013 2:23:00 PM
Bang goes my techno cred again, Have gone an stuck you in Anne Lise reply box lol, I need looking after or a bib lol.
Date: 4/25/2013 6:34:00 PM
thanks, Richard, for the fave. I had a ball doing that poem. Go write one about food now yourself.
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Richard D Seal
Date: 4/26/2013 2:15:00 PM
I'll answer this in your comment box lol
Date: 4/25/2013 5:43:00 PM
yes, the light still on.... that says it all, Richard. I can tell you must make a marvelous friend. I think you did a good job portraying it thru this contest poem!
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Date: 4/26/2013 2:13:00 PM
Thank you Andrea, I feel I'm one of those lucky ones, I walk through town and at least half a dozen peeps stop me for a chat. sometimes ones I have not seen for years, funny thing is they call me by whatever name it is they remember me by, which is anything from a dog to an unmentionable, but they always greet me with a smile, can't beat that.
Date: 4/24/2013 12:16:00 PM
Richard....I consider you a dear friend. You've been so supportive and kind in your comments. You tease and lighten my spirit. Hope we never fall out! ;) BTW...the door is always open.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/27/2013 9:51:00 PM
Hello! :) Thanks for asking about me and reading my earlier work. You are an awesome. Yes, I'm OK...I answered your post there. Waiting for a new poem from you, Richard. Auntie says hurry up and be good about it.
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Richard D Seal
Date: 4/24/2013 12:29:00 PM
You know my light will always be on for you Eileen. Feel free to stab my selfishness, it might hurt but I wont bleed :)
Date: 4/24/2013 10:03:00 AM
Becca sure is going to have a difficult time judging this contest! I loved the sincerity in this - especially the part about "smiling being a herald of informality". When you don't feel obligated to smile and just do it naturally you know you're around someone that is a true friend!
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Richard D Seal
Date: 4/24/2013 11:13:00 AM
Am smiling :)
Date: 4/24/2013 8:22:00 AM
You describe friendship really well, right down to the fall-outs. Good luck in the contest with this strong entry. :)
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Richard D Seal
Date: 4/24/2013 11:11:00 AM
I'm easy to fall out with lol, but the best understand, that's what makes them the best.

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