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At the City Pool

I’m sitting here relaxing with great ease since swimming laps here at the city pool. It’s Saturday and there’s a little breeze this afternoon, which makes it slightly cool. I’m feeling glad that Monday there’s no school and worries of the week are in the past. I’m happy too that I have time at last to sit and write a little poetry. I need to write some more and do it fast. . . My sweet time into darkness soon shall flee. Written Saturday, Sept. 3, 2016 for the Dizain Poem II Contest of Laura Loo

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Date: 9/7/2016 3:42:00 PM
Hope you had a great Labor Day Andrea. Anytime you can steal away to create a poem is fun for you, so it sounds as if you decide did! I enjoyed reading this.; ) 7
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Date: 9/6/2016 2:11:00 PM
May the light be with you. Love, Dave
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Date: 9/6/2016 11:02:00 AM
A lovely Dizain Andrea...best wishes ...
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Date: 9/6/2016 10:05:00 AM
A reflective write my friend, glad to see darkness is fading..good luck with this contest
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Date: 9/6/2016 9:26:00 AM
I'm longing for this wonderful time, to sit, relax, and esp., no school so I can write too :) A wonderful poem my dear friend. My pleasure to read again from you. Btw, just came back home this evening and I've almost missed the date: Happy, Happy Birthday!I Wish you all the best and the happiest birthday ever! God bless! love lots and Big b-day hugs with kisses from me, Leonora
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Date: 9/6/2016 9:18:00 AM
Great Dizain Andrea...summer is almost over...time to write more lol...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 9/6/2016 8:55:00 AM
AD, And hopefully slimmer I will be. You forgot the last line. I am into limericks right now. Jim Horn
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Date: 9/6/2016 3:18:00 AM
It's good to relax and write a little poetry, isn't it? Loved the easy flow:)
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Date: 9/5/2016 10:13:00 PM
A just-because poem! I loved finding this ... CayCay
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Date: 9/5/2016 10:01:00 PM
Enjoy every minute of everyday Andrea. It is nice to have some time to relax and write.
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