At the Carnival

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At the Carnival My dad sure did it! He shot all the targets down! Pick your prize, he said. That stuffed cat, bigger than me- Hard walking my tiger home. July 24, 2016 Contest: Childhood Nostalgia Sponsor: JCB Brul

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 8/31/2022 3:13:00 PM

LOL. What a vivid memory Sandra! Congratulations on your win! Linda

Francine Roberts

Date: 8/31/2022 8:40:00 AM

made me smile , congrats

Tom Arnone

Date: 7/28/2016 9:46:00 AM

Nice. Short. To the point -- and, indeed, hard walking your tiger home. :-)

Laura Leiser

Date: 7/27/2016 5:26:00 PM

Fun take on what I think is a difficult theme for a contest, Sandra! Well done :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/24/2016 5:44:00 PM

WOW, I love how you made this into such an easy yet WONDERFUL way to meet the challenge. Great thinking, Sandra. I spent over an hour on my long story . If only I had thought up one like this. I LOVE IT.

Daniel Turner

Date: 7/24/2016 1:02:00 PM

Great take on the theme Mrs Sandra. That's an awful big tiger.

Madhupriya Shanmugam

Date: 7/24/2016 11:33:00 AM

Very cute thought Sandra:)