At Sunrise

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Rinsed clean yesterday's sun tiptoes across the dawn washed by last night's dream of rainbows refreshed .......................................... For Sara's Cinquain contest 6/9/15

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/16/2015 11:05:00 AM

Thanks for your participation in my contest..Congrats on your placement..Sara

Carrie Richards
Date: 6/16/2015 11:56:00 AM

Thank you for the placement, Sara !! :)

Constance La France

Date: 6/14/2015 3:54:00 PM

Carrie, beautiful 7 and thanks for visiting my haiku

Emile Pinet

Date: 6/12/2015 1:44:00 PM

This is very beautiful and so well penned. I thought that the ending was very clever and closed this poem with style. Emile. #7

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/11/2015 11:59:00 PM

ditto what Jan said!! And congrats, Carrie.

Eve Roper

Date: 6/11/2015 4:59:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, hugs dear friend Eve

Skat A

Date: 6/11/2015 3:52:00 PM

Carrie, Congratulations........ SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/11/2015 2:10:00 PM

Jan, Congratulations on your win. LOVE LINDA"

Jan Allison

Date: 6/11/2015 10:10:00 AM

I cant believe this placed so low Carrie I personally thought it was outstanding! hugs jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 6/11/2015 10:28:00 AM

Yes it is not an exact science lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Carrie Richards
Date: 6/11/2015 10:17:00 AM

Thank you, Jan......."the eye of the beholder" is different for everyone, and do understand that we can't know what will appeal to everyone, everytime ! :) But thank you !!