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At Rainbow's End

At rainbow’s end, I looked for gold; And still I search, Alone and cold: The rainbow’s gone And now I’m old. For PD’s Rainbow contest

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Jack Ellison

Date: 10/6/2012 8:39:00 AM

You just described my life! LOL Just kidding... my life's been a blast! Congrats!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/1/2012 3:36:00 PM

LOVE yours, Jack, congrats AGAIN today.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/1/2012 6:05:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Rainbow Fun~" contest Jack. Love, Carol

Joe Maverick

Date: 9/30/2012 1:42:00 PM

Gee you must be in England Jack; L O L.." I think also we have grey'un-bows here...Well if we don't yet; I'm sure they'll be discoverd somewhere.."

Kathryn Collins

Date: 9/30/2012 7:41:00 AM

Very funny.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/29/2012 6:35:00 AM

CONGRATS JACK LUV ON A TERRIFIC WIN FOR A RAINBOW OF A WRITE .. ALWAYS A TREAT LUV ..

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 9/29/2012 3:25:00 AM

Oh this is sad jack but well done on your terrific win xx

Tahera Mannan

Date: 9/29/2012 2:25:00 AM

Many congrats Jack for this wonderful win

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/29/2012 12:11:00 AM

Jack, I'm having tons of rainbow fun ;-) reading and congratulating all my colorful "Rainbow Fun" winners. A sweet congratulations, ,,thank you for inspiring the contest...goodnight~ xox~ PD

Len Gasun

Date: 9/28/2012 8:27:00 PM

Thinking of our age will be the one to make us grow old Jack. An awesome write indeed! Good luck and best wishes in the contest!!! Have a nice and grace-filled day always!!!hugs:) Leonora

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/27/2012 9:32:00 PM

U ALWAYS SAY SO MUCH IN YOUR FINE POETRY JACK .. WE MUST NEVER END OUR SEARCHING LUV .. BEST WISHES ..

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/26/2012 7:46:00 AM

i'am right with there jack, Oh so old, love this...

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 9/25/2012 9:18:00 PM

awesome poem Jack..Good luck in the contest. :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/25/2012 3:28:00 PM

ohh, a melancholic yet beautiful song, jack.. "the rainbow’s gone ,and now I’m old."...skillful use of words with deep emotional appeal..:) huggs!

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/25/2012 7:02:00 AM

so profound....you have made my cup of coffee sweeter this am!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/24/2012 10:22:00 PM

LOVE THIS. I think it's my favorite of all these rainbow poems I am now seeing. Short and sweet and to a point I can really relate to.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/24/2012 10:22:00 PM

and to think you are at least 10 years younger than I am. GEEEEZ

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/24/2012 3:37:00 PM

Too sad!!! Change the way your rainbows ..bowed/ restring that broken arch, pick some bright red feathers for the shaft and take new start! Light & Love

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/24/2012 3:36:00 PM

Reads like a winner..While on vacation there was a Rainbow out over the ocean..I wondered if???Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/24/2012 2:33:00 PM

lol, funny my friend! I really enjoyed this cleverly written write! This should peak PD's interest, she likes a good bit of humor...and you are a master of good humor Jack! This is an awesome piece, Great Work!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/24/2012 2:15:00 PM

I did not find the gold me neither Jack. Very nice rhyme. Good luck in the contest, hope your poem will win. - Oxox love Anne-Lise :)