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At My Last Goodbye- a Duo-Rhyme

What really happens when its your time to die, Your last breath taken, does your soul leave and fly. Is there really a deceased family member there to greet, Someone you loved greatly, waiting for the final meet. Is heaven really beautiful, at the gate is there a seat, If you’ve lived a good life, is it like a perfect retreat. Can there be life after death, I hope, or is this deceit, When we die, are we gone, just our bodies in concrete. As a scientific person my thoughts make it hard to lie, But I believe my family will greet me at my last goodbye.
Written July 27, 2012 For Andrea Dietrich’s contest Duo-rhyme

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/28/2012 2:32:00 AM
ever present friends...never really leave you...my dad comes to visit and i hear him on occasion...
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Date: 7/28/2012 2:31:00 AM
Hmm...Lee ,iambic Tetrameter?
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