At My Cost

Ways are multifarious Let me choose Light is seen dark Without booze Gift of God is Felt as curse Upside down head Beautiful verse Foolish am stubborn Stubborn so fool My hate invites me Wisdom is misrule God is angry So am is lost Perverse is prize At my cost

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/29/2017 1:25:00 PM

- A beautiful creation we humans destroy ... I understand that God is angry - A deep poem of emotions, dear friend Bl - A pleasure to see you on my poems today - Hope all is well with you - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/30/2017 1:16:00 PM

Thanks my dear lovely friend for your comment. Loved always, bl

Judy Ball

Date: 8/28/2017 8:13:00 AM

God is a good and loving Father my friend. And sometimes, like all good fathers He must say "NO" to His children because what they want is not right for them at this time. Sometimes He says No and sometimes He says WAIT. But He has not forsaken us. Sometimes we have to go through hard times to learn something. Life is not always fun and it is not always fair but it is ALWAYS AN EXPERIENCE. What we choose to learn from that experience decides the future. A fine write my friend. God Bless, JB

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/29/2017 12:35:00 PM

You are right my dear friend. i feel if we disobey God means if we do not do what he asks us to do, He becomes angry and as a prize we fall in to ignorance and then we with our ignorance think that construction is destruction and vise versa and we lose our real life on this earth. Thanks for your comment. Loved always, bl

Lynn Marie

Date: 8/25/2017 2:06:00 AM

Tragic for anyone to feel such despair. You have penned the emotions beautifully BL and I especially enjoy reading this rhyme from you. hope you find time during your busy season to enjoy some happy, fun moments:)

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/26/2017 12:37:00 PM

Thanks my dear friend for your uplifting comment. Always loved, bl