Get Your Premium Membership

At Four

I woke from a s w e e t dream and it was four, and in a trance I walked into a door; then I tripped on my C A T done that before, walking in the dark of night - like what for. My head hurts and my foot is really sore, and after that darn sneaky cat, I tore; then I slid on my s h i n y hardwood floor, crashed into a table and loudly swore. I w o k e u p in my bed from a big snore, a dream- or was I sleep walking at four? _________________________ August 24, 2016 Poetry/Monorhyme/At Four Copyright Protected, ID 16-82-843-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, Monorhyme Mania sponsor, John Hamilton Third Place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 8/30/2016 5:55:00 PM
Congrats on your win Constance
Login to Reply
Date: 8/30/2016 3:31:00 PM
SOOO cute Broken Wings,,,I love little kitties! congrats on your placement! :)-luloo
Login to Reply
Date: 8/29/2016 7:35:00 PM
Hi BW, I enjoyed take on the contest theme. The kitty is adorable. Congratulations on your winning write. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
Login to Reply
Date: 8/29/2016 6:47:00 PM
what a cutie of a kitten. Well done and congratulations, Constance.
Login to Reply
Date: 8/29/2016 4:31:00 PM
You fooled me on this one Constance, now I see your sense of humour! Good one, congrats on a fine placement!
Login to Reply
Date: 8/29/2016 4:29:00 PM
Congrats!!! my dear friend...great write...nice kitty...god bless...^WW^
Login to Reply
Date: 8/26/2016 12:31:00 PM
Excellent! Cat tripping, I've learned, bothers them more than us! Your poem is a wacky event that would happen to me, I just love the humor, style and content - I love it all! Good luck in all things ... CayCay
Login to Reply
Date: 8/26/2016 1:26:00 AM
Very well written, Constance:)
Login to Reply
Date: 8/25/2016 5:12:00 PM
The strange things that happen when we are asleep or even partially awake. The mind is a really fun thing to think about, and you are so good at it.
Login to Reply
Date: 8/24/2016 5:46:00 PM
Interesting and funny!! Sorry have not been around lately--so hard to get around to so many fine poets such as you dear heart. . .Take care, Tom
Login to Reply
Date: 8/24/2016 10:44:00 AM
awesome monoryhme Broken Wings, John will love this...good luck :)-luloo
Login to Reply
Date: 8/24/2016 5:49:00 AM
Very nice Monorhyme ... Read with much pleasure ...
Login to Reply
Date: 8/24/2016 2:22:00 AM
such a descriptive piece ; i hope this is just a dream, constance!.. loving this; huggs!
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs