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At First Glance

At First Glance I went to a dance one night in the Fall of ‘84 and danced with your friend for awhile and than I saw you at first glance with that olive skinned smile your petite lithe shape and full red lips we met and you spoke to me of your native land then I took your hand and we danced on and on for many suns and many moons children came in days of wine and brine and here I am a vintage man so much for wear who still loves you and will always care and life has shown as we continue to fill the time we have left living on the edge to celebrate that ocassional thread of luck of money or joy and that makes everything right for who knows what occurs on the morrow to wait for that chance at first glance to dance again Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/2/2015 3:24:00 PM
Thank you, Lyric Man. I will enjoy the weekend
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Date: 5/18/2015 1:40:00 PM
RALPH, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. SKAT love
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 5/18/2015 5:00:00 PM
Thank you, SKAT
Date: 3/12/2015 9:42:00 AM
hanks for recommending this. Enjoyed it.
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Date: 8/8/2014 10:50:00 PM
Your words flow effortlessly, Ralph! Thank you for sharing your celebration of life and love...beautiful! I also thank you for reading "Under My Skin" and the encouraging comments. And yes, Cole Porter is still alive through his wonderful music! Have a great weekend. Annalise
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Date: 7/22/2014 2:47:00 PM
Don 't stop dancing Ralph,make it last forever.So beautiful this is.Tnks for stopping by my humble verse.
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Date: 7/19/2014 3:45:00 PM
Who said that love at first glance does not exist?! You still carry with you the magical effect that the first glance had on you; may you enjoy many more enchanting suns and moons together! // paul
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 7/20/2014 8:05:00 AM
Hi Paul: Thanks for your comment and the dance continues.
Date: 7/16/2014 4:09:00 AM
Ralph I just love this and it brings back fond memories for me...David
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Date: 7/13/2014 3:36:00 PM
The dance of life with the one you love, It doesn't get much better than that, Ralph. very nice poem my friend..... Robert.
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 7/14/2014 7:29:00 AM
Hi Robert, nice to know you, Thank you for your comment.
Date: 7/7/2014 6:57:00 PM
i like the line many moons and many suns then the 3succeddding lines under it... :) wow sweet sweet one.. :)
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 7/9/2014 6:52:00 AM
Thank you, Olive. Todavia bailamos!
Date: 7/4/2014 9:09:00 AM
What a great dance Ralph....dance into the sunset my friend
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