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At Ease With Oneselves

They leap with gracefulness in the air.....at ease with oneselves The gazelles whose graciousness is there.....at ease with oneselves So beautiful the plateaus where animals graze Content in their surrounding, relaxed not a care .....at ease with oneselves God looks kindly at the sight knowing all is well Grass is lush, trees at their best, great animal fare ....at ease with oneselves Look, see the children yelling as they run and play A happy childhood, makes them adults who care .....at ease with oneselves Home past the gazelles, who run and leap Knowing we mean no harm we are all there .....at ease with oneselve Penned October 11th 2013

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/5/2015 4:13:00 PM

SEREN, Dropped by to say hi and congratulate you on having your poem selected by Soup's Administration. This is a wonderful poem to have featured on the homepage. Have yourself a Happy Easter ~Always & Forever~ LINDA

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/16/2013 2:34:00 PM

Way to go with this winning work..Congrats on your great win..Sara

Skat A

Date: 11/15/2013 11:05:00 AM

Seren, Congratulations, on your 'Take the Leap' win............ LOVE ~ SKAT ~

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/14/2013 5:06:00 PM

An interesting way to bring the tongue in cheek pun into the contest for the poetic Ghazal! As always a winner. Congrad's Light & Love

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 11/13/2013 12:14:00 PM

Seren, very lovely ghazal, like your end phrase, congratulations on your win.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/12/2013 2:56:00 AM

Congratulations on the win, Seren

Sandra Adams

Date: 11/11/2013 7:33:00 PM

You handed this form very well...nicely penned lovely poem...congrats on your win :)

Honestly J.T.

Date: 10/14/2013 2:15:00 AM

Nice one and good luck in the contest

Seren Roberts
Date: 10/16/2013 9:56:00 AM

thank you for stopping by ...Seren

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/13/2013 5:08:00 PM

wonderful Poetry Seren, as a calming effect...

Seren Roberts
Date: 10/13/2013 11:05:00 PM

Harry. Thnks for commenting....Seren

David Williams

Date: 10/12/2013 8:55:00 AM

Seren you smoothy you, I like the format of this and the beauty in the image is terrific, well done and i will get around to finishing our affair ha ha...but not for good though....David xx

Seren Roberts
Date: 10/12/2013 6:17:00 PM

lol Breathe held til you return,thanks for stopping by...Seren

Monterey Sirak

Date: 10/12/2013 7:42:00 AM

Simply beautiful.

Seren Roberts
Date: 10/12/2013 6:18:00 PM

Monterey I missed you, hope a;ll is ok. Thnks for comment ...Seren

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/11/2013 11:18:00 PM

Very soothing and graceful Ghazal, Seren

Seren Roberts
Date: 10/11/2013 11:54:00 PM

Thanks Ram, cant say I enjoyed writing in this form....Seren

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/11/2013 9:50:00 PM

Wow, Seren, you do write quite masterfully and with so many different forms! It's nice to see you try these kinds of forms, I think I've tried this form maybe once in my life...I didn't like it and it wasn't anywhere close to the mastery at which you have crafted here my friend! What a grandiose piece, Great Work!!

Seren Roberts
Date: 10/11/2013 11:53:00 PM

Lol its been a pain in tne butt....Seren

Dan Kearley

Date: 10/11/2013 4:05:00 PM

This is very nice Seren... Very graceful. :o)

Seren Roberts
Date: 10/11/2013 4:22:00 PM

Hi Dan did u sort things my friend...Seren

Jack Horne

Date: 10/11/2013 2:59:00 PM

love this and what a fun form - must try it

Seren Roberts
Date: 10/11/2013 4:20:00 PM

hmmm fun form made me swear lol ...Seren