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At Doomsday-Dreaming

o, the young night’s roughening palms solid upon the drowsy faces of niger-lads – the slow current of the stream of sleep drifting the niger’s world – & we went a-stupor like old troy besieged by fury greece – then lovely maidens frightened us with looks of beautyful truthings of the false brevity as old priests flew at noon doomsday-dreaming beyond the niger-maid’s hidden chambers …

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Date: 4/24/2011 2:56:00 PM
yes priests looking for souls [line 11 beautiful] introduce more color, sound and touch into your imagery Canny certainly this is NOT a bloodless subject yet you show us no blood [metaphoric blood, life...why & how did the maidens frighten explain the frightful continence?] Light & Love
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