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At a Loss For Words

Where’s that darn cocktail napkin where I scribbled my first lines The next verse was scrawled on an envelope tucked in my coat Then Sunday at the beach, I etched a stanza in the sand After taking a swim, waves had distorted what I wrote The idea’s there; I have it, but I cannot jot it down As my eyelids grow heavy and into dreamland I’m drawn Bits and pieces of poetry rush forth in dreams forgotten When morning sun streams through the room and my eyes greet the dawn Profound thoughts they must have been to leave me with such despair Finally I sit at my computer, stare at a blank screen Hours pass and still no words have managed to retrieve Sometimes it’s so frustrating I just hang my head and scream

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/18/2011 10:03:00 AM
congrats on a real high win, carols... woderful write.. huggs, nette
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Date: 2/15/2011 7:45:00 PM
I've had those experiences myself in the past. You describe everything well with your words and rhyming.
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Date: 7/13/2010 2:42:00 PM
Congrats, my Sis! A great win! Hope your well! Thnx for leaving kind comments on my Haiku. 10Th Place, wow! Love, JA
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Date: 7/13/2010 12:27:00 PM
Congratulations Carolyn on your win in A Rambling Poet's contest "Did you see my poem, I lost it!". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/12/2010 6:27:00 PM
oh, I sure know this feeling , Carolyn. This is great writing! WAs this for that really fast contest I just missed? Luv,andrea
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Date: 7/12/2010 5:24:00 PM
Very nice poem. I enjoyed reading this. Poetry is a poet's outlet to release and sometimes when the words don't come to us it can be quite frustrating. Have a great day dear. Scarlett
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Date: 7/12/2010 3:16:00 PM
nicely rhymed poem, and Happy Birthday Wednesday
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Date: 7/12/2010 10:33:00 AM
sounds like a day in my life some times. My son inspires me alot when we are riding in the car and I can't write it down...
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Date: 7/12/2010 9:02:00 AM
Or the time to offline - to say it with Brian!-, relax and have a nice little Whisky (Of course a Scotch). After that you won't stop writing!!! I always keep some paper an a pen at my bedside table as often I awake at night and have to write something down!...Best of luck for the contest and thank you for your kind comments, Carolyn!...Have a great week...Love, Gert
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Date: 7/12/2010 1:07:00 AM
I carry all mine around in a plastic supermarket bag, yet i still never can find what i want, good luck in contest this is really excellent Carolyn.. Harry
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Date: 7/11/2010 11:39:00 PM
That's the time to go off line and have a nice glass of red Carolyn.Rgds Brian
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Date: 7/11/2010 10:58:00 PM
I could soo relate with this one, Carolyn! and you sure put it together so nicely too!! Wish you the best in the contest and thank you so much for my placement in your contest --it definitely made me smile ^_^ -- nikko :)
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