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At a Glance of Elegy

At a glance of elegy In a crack of dawn of a beautiful morn here is a smile that cross my mind hugged me with it’s warm draped me with a deep yearning flared up my feeling with flaming fire my longing to see your smile I blended myself to your existance filled me with your glorious piece of love deep in my compassionate ground to eleminate my elegiac mind how i adored the moment when you were there let me fly unto you in every dawn in every morn sukmawati komala 05 february 2013

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Date: 3/25/2013 11:22:00 AM
Dear Sukmawati, hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. A very warm Welcome to the Soup. I do believe I shall join the ranks of commenters TO YOUR POETIC Tapestries. You write very well for I feel YOUR LOVE of YOUR life in this POEM. Superb PEN. With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry
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Sukmawati Komala
Date: 1/27/2014 6:28:00 PM
hi HGarvey thank you so very much for your time, supports and courages :) all the best :)
Date: 3/5/2013 11:14:00 AM
another very nice write Sukmawati xo's ,,,, thank you for reading my haiku six ;}
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Sukmawati Komala
Date: 1/27/2014 6:29:00 PM
hi deary Debbie .... so nice to see you... much love and light
Date: 2/9/2013 1:54:00 PM
Nicely done
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Sukmawati Komala
Date: 1/27/2014 6:29:00 PM
Hi thank you dear Scott.. appreciate so much :)
Date: 2/9/2013 4:06:00 AM
wow am i glad to see you have posted, sukmawati, this is wonderful poetry...
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Sukmawati Komala
Date: 1/27/2014 6:30:00 PM
thank you so much deary Harry... always so happy to see you :) much love and peace :)
Date: 2/6/2013 10:53:00 PM
So beautiful... :o) Where did all you poetry go? I was stopping by to read some again but it is all gone? But I will read what is here.And be happy with that. <3 (o:
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Sukmawati Komala
Date: 1/27/2014 6:28:00 PM
hi Thank you deary bro Dan...hope everything is well with you too :) so happy to see your smile :)
Date: 2/6/2013 2:06:00 PM
i have read all of your poems. im glad to see another amazing poet on this website...i am inspired, thank you. with love, izzy
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