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Astronomers

Teleporting into your giant...galaxy Eclipsed in time...lost in outer space. Jumping from start to star While...holding one captive. My love comets...yearning...your quaker body, As...asteroids...attack my sensitive...soul. A magnetic field...forces my decisions, Drawing me to a darker abyss. I gracefully...gravitate toward your love planet. The captive...star illuminates my path, Your moon beckons me to stop by and plant my flag. I orbit your planet for a moment, Radioactive pulsars...playfully signal, For my astronomical...atomic landing. I land on your constellation...beauty; I touch and tame the milky...way. Commencing to explore the black...hole. We make love on a bed of stars, Looking...like two stuck...satellites in orbit. My rocket’s fuel gage is full. I’m about to blast...off. T-minus: 10..9..8..7..6..5..4..3..2..1..lift off. I’m shooting...stars...as you meteor...shower And my mind goes into nova...

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Date: 4/27/2009 10:34:00 PM
Nice work, steamy but great, I've had my mind enter nova many times.
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Date: 4/17/2009 11:49:00 PM
Nice work, steamy lines.
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Date: 4/12/2009 3:19:00 PM
I blushed the second time I read it. That's when I realized how sensual it is. I'm too old to blush. LOL Your words and the flow are magical. The is excellent.
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Date: 4/12/2009 12:03:00 PM
Very different and a nice reach for you Raul. Congrads on your win in my contest!Light & Love
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Date: 4/10/2009 12:51:00 PM
Fun analogies playing in this one, Raul! The count down made me laugh until coffee came out of my nose! Warm regards, John.
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Date: 4/10/2009 12:50:00 PM
Ha ha too excellent! Love how your mind is working! Clever, clever write. Happy Easter Raul to you and yours. Love, Shar
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Date: 4/10/2009 8:36:00 AM
This is so well written, Raul! Love the creative theme and phrasing in this passonate piece. I have missed reading everyone and this just wowed me. Well done, my friend! Love, Robin
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Date: 4/10/2009 8:21:00 AM
Very imaginative and modern Raul.Rgds Brian & thanks for your kind words & comments today
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Date: 4/10/2009 4:11:00 AM
cool!!!!!!!!!
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