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Astral Springs

Scintillating whispers of hushed sapphire dew, my heart flutters in shades of pale blue; blooming waves in topaz rings, desires spread new wings to a song. Springs rush along curled silver glass strings, my thread of memories clings to spectrum of stars falling in queue, scintillating whispers of hushed sapphire dew. July 13, 2020 Andaree - 11 Lines Poetry Contest Sponsor: Joseph May Rhymes checked with rhymezone.com Syllables checked with howmanysyllables.com ~Winner: 1st Place

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/19/2020 3:20:00 PM

simply gorgeous. You did my form so proud! WOW. FAVE and congrats for the well deserved win. I did a contest a long time ago of my form, and yours would have been number one in my contest too!

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/29/2020 3:49:00 AM

Thank you for such kind words of appreciation and the fave. Your form is lovely Andrea. I really enjoyed it. I hope someday I'll be able to write for a contest by you in your form :)

Jcb Brul

Date: 7/19/2020 9:15:00 AM

Lovely poem,dear Aditi. Your pen is infinite. Congratulations on your TOP WIN..

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/29/2020 3:48:00 AM

I am always blessed to hear from you dear friend. You are really kind. Blessings and love. Thank you for appreciating :)

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 7/19/2020 7:18:00 AM

Great write! Congrats on another top win!! Your talent shines!

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/29/2020 3:47:00 AM

Thank you for your kind words of appreciation Krish! :)

Jenna Logan

Date: 7/19/2020 6:34:00 AM

Congratulations on your lines being honored, Aditi.

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/29/2020 3:47:00 AM

Thank you for your appreciation Jenna :)

Winged Warrior

Date: 7/19/2020 6:28:00 AM

Back to Congrats!! dear goddess lol...^WW^ :o)

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/29/2020 3:47:00 AM

Oh that's a grand compliment from the master of words. Thank you WW! ^_^

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/18/2020 7:31:00 PM

Your use of colors and gems in your imagery sings its own melody Aditi. This is lovely and very deserving of FIRST place. Congratulations! Blessings xxoo

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/29/2020 3:45:00 AM

You are really generous with your lovely appreciation Connie. Thanks for such kind words. Blessings and love :)

John Watt

Date: 7/18/2020 5:34:00 PM

Aditi, I love all the gems and precious metals you reference in this andaree, it adds a lustre to the poems tone, giving it that extra light and color. I loved the line "desires spread new wings / to a song" but every line shines. Congratulations on your win for this inspired write, my friend!

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/29/2020 3:44:00 AM

I am always happy to see your observations on my themes and the way you dive deep into my muse John. Thank you for such kind words of appreciation dear friend :) Blessings!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/18/2020 3:54:00 PM

Such a beautiful poem, Aditi--a WINNER! Janice

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/29/2020 3:43:00 AM

Thank you for your kind wishes Janice :)

Joseph May

Date: 7/18/2020 3:25:00 PM

Love the "scintillating whispers" Aditi, Beautiful write, Congrats on your win

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/29/2020 3:43:00 AM

Glad you loved it Joseph. Thank you for appreciating and for my placement in your contest :)

Jan Allison

Date: 7/18/2020 3:11:00 PM

Absolutely beautiful, I love the rhyme a d use of colour, many congratulations on your win :-) Hugs Jan xx

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/29/2020 3:42:00 AM

Glad you loved it Jan. Thank you for your kind appreciation. Blessings and love :)

Winged Warrior

Date: 7/14/2020 5:53:00 AM

Awesomeness!!...you have a pen of a goddess...hugs...^WW^ :o)

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/14/2020 10:04:00 AM

You are too kind with your appreciation my friend. Thank you dear WW :) Hugs!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/14/2020 4:05:00 AM

A gorgeous Andaree; well done indeed! very pretty and impressive Aditi.

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/14/2020 10:04:00 AM

Thank you dear Caren. Love :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/13/2020 11:07:00 PM

Here you go again, Aditi --- straight into the Winner's Circle with this magical write. It glitters like gold! Peace and Light, Gershon

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/14/2020 10:03:00 AM

You are very generous and kind with your appreciation Gershon. It is an honour to hear from you. Thank you for such gracious wishes :)

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 7/13/2020 8:23:00 PM

Love the rich colors you have described, like 'hushed sapphire blue' and 'curled silver glass strings' - so evocative of the romance of night, best wishes for the contest!

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/14/2020 10:03:00 AM

Thank you for diving deep into the muse and appreciating it Michelle. Glad you loved it. Much love :)

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 7/13/2020 10:07:00 AM

Oh so beautiful. I love the rhymes you brought to this poem, and the first line is so wonderful. Blessings to you in your day.

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/14/2020 10:02:00 AM

Glad you loved my muse Jeanne. Thank you for such wonderful appreciation. Blessings and love :)

Jenish Somadas

Date: 7/13/2020 6:52:00 AM

Nice creative write Aditi.. Great entry.. Good luck..

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/13/2020 9:15:00 AM

Thank you for your kind appreciation my friend :)