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Astonishing That We Should Live At All

To fulminate against the hands of fate To vent our anger on beloved friends Will not repair our ills and our mistakes But may bring friendships to a bitter end. For who are we to know what is the best? Who are we to choose when loved ones die? And do not think this is a needed test. As if on us God wastes his time to spy. Once we were a joining of two cells The lively sperm, a salmon riding high. The egg awaiting without need for bells Is fertilised and grows that which shall die. Astonishing that we should live at all. Unsurprising, that a loved one falls.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/21/2016 11:00:00 AM
Life is a wonderful Mystery and death but a doorway Home.
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Katherine Braithwaite
Date: 5/21/2016 12:22:00 PM
As Wm Blake said.Thank you,Lenny
Date: 5/21/2016 9:46:00 AM
So terribly sad to remember that all we are comes to an end and that we lose our loved ones along the way. Great write.
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Katherine Braithwaite
Date: 5/21/2016 12:23:00 PM
Yes,indeed I am very sad when I think of people gone.I am so glad you enjoyed my poem,Jonathan

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