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asprodite

“asprodite” we could never see eye to eye for i not only being taller than you am in some ways blind love is like that and that is like love hardly hard but still stone petrified to be alone yet all very so a lone

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James Peranteau

Date: 12/16/2023 12:14:00 AM

you are the quintessential writer here jeff...Oh; Don't put your title in the text page for your write, it's posted in the box above where you post your write...i told ya, i stop in on writers here...u questioned mine enthusiastic with regard the poets here...i enjoy immensely discovering the astute, likewise growing future astute writers, especially here on "Poetry Soup"! james

Bill Baker

Date: 12/4/2023 10:12:00 PM

Very creative with both thoughts and shaping of the poem, Jeff. I like it! Have a great week, my friend. Bill

Jeff Connelly
Date: 12/5/2023 4:58:00 AM

Thanks Bill. You too

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

Date: 11/30/2023 5:10:00 PM

Jeff, this is something I have to study. I mean, the poem is awesome. The meaning, I have to interpretate it. You mean, about love through internet?. Better, don't.. Sometimes, it's better to be alone than being with bad stòries. Have a nice evening Jeff

Jeff Connelly
Date: 12/1/2023 4:30:00 AM

I love your interpretation, Maria. Thanks so much for reading and making me think

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/30/2023 4:02:00 PM

wow, a stunning creation, Jeff. It almost left me breathless. I admire your skill here...well done. have a great evening, Sara

Jeff Connelly
Date: 12/1/2023 4:29:00 AM

You are too kind Sara, but thank you for the comment

Mat Ignacio

Date: 11/30/2023 7:56:00 AM

well said here - caught my eye, the shape, timing, phrasing -

Jeff Connelly
Date: 11/30/2023 3:39:00 PM

Thanks Mat