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Asleep

Asleep You are, I sit and I wait, Your breath resembles T’ sound of ocean waves, Like petals of iris, shreds of cloudless sky, Your eyes' deepest blue makes me mesmerized, ‘Till my Lilly opens to the morning heat I will sit and wait, But you’re still Asleep

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/19/2013 12:10:00 PM
Miroslaw, wow... .....very deep...LINDA
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Date: 12/13/2013 4:44:00 AM
hi Mioslaw, congratulations on your win xx
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Date: 12/13/2013 4:21:00 AM
Enjoyed the poem and congrats, Miroslow
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Date: 12/12/2013 12:35:00 PM
All the poetry submitted was heartfelt. From love throughout life to love in the depths of death with reflections of nature. You are all deserving First Place Winners and I thank you for entering your favorites in my contest.
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