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Ask Me How It Feels

my man melting and kissing this Hagar woman I sat on his lap. And please, let it be fast, before my heart dries out, for this time you pushed it too far, my womb is just as good, my love is even better, it should have been me, damn you God, damn me. The ground will soundly sleep under the steps of our empty souls. Make me unwise: show me the dagger and ask me how it feels.

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Date: 7/16/2011 2:27:00 AM
great job in this poetical art...fantastic feeling portrayed..junjun.*-*
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