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Though my feelings may be unrecognizable I feel I know you. The gentle sound of your voice is most desireable, And you smile radiating a different hue. The sway of your hips carry your impeccable style, And your fragrance haunts my senses. Visions of your silhouette walking through my mind mile by mile, Preoccupying my mind leaving my heart defenseless. Though we are furtherest from what each other need, It still can't overcome my wants. The want of your sultry presense surrounding me, The visions of your beauty still haunts. Reality has turned into a phantasm by me, As I still celebrate the first time I seen you. Though your eyes may see right past me, My eyes see what is true. Your beauty is impressionable, Your strength is immeasurable. If you think this poem is about you, There is only way to find out. Ask me....

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Date: 7/24/2009 7:06:00 AM
wonderful write with interesting imageries, you are such a creative writer... keep the flag flying... keep sharing you thoughts here... great you! adeleke
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Date: 7/23/2009 3:23:00 PM
I do hope she does, Paul! Lovely poem - thank you!
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