Ask the Master

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~Ask The Master~ (Rhyme ) When all around you see All your dreams go wrong Ask the Master for help He'll help you be strong When troubles pile up high And you can't seem to cope Ask the Master for help He'll give you more love hope When life's road seems so hard And you just struggle in vain Ask the Master for help He'll take away your pain When the blues take over And your spirit is low Ask the Master for help In everything through you go Right there just kneel and pray He'll give you more strength then Ask the Master for help He listens, He's your best friend. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2005 January.29.2016 ~Author's Notes: - “For God so loved the world, that he gave his only Son, that whoever believes in him should not perish but have eternal life. John 3: 16

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Jean Mcloughlin

Date: 1/29/2016 5:05:00 AM

Great write Dorian, sometimes we forget to ask. You put it so well! Best wishes, from Jean

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/4/2016 12:05:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly, Jean ,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Very deeply I appreciate it.Likewise!:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you always!:) D.