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Ashton's Flight

pink lollipop on yellow cotton candy tree marshmallows in meadows hold up me; i sail on peppermint wings... amongst... around these beautiful things i have no cat that plays no fiddle no dish running away with a spoon but evening finds me decked out in splendor as I fly by that cow jumping over the moon my wings flash silvery in the moon's glow a mighty sight to people below they hold their breath and sigh, how d o e s she fly so slow!!! now everyone knows I am landing and dread it woe and woe is me... my head is thumping, my heart is jumping oh Lord, How I hate reali -Tee, ---Hee Hee Hee

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Date: 4/10/2016 2:39:00 AM
Betty Burdette, awesome poem. linda
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Date: 8/28/2015 7:18:00 PM
BETTY, Enjoyed this very much... SKAT
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Date: 5/13/2009 12:18:00 PM
This is excellent! I like the internal rhyming pattern and the flow of the words. It reminds me of my childhood bed night stories. Great job! ~Joseph
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Date: 5/12/2009 3:57:00 PM
Nice poem. I'm going to read more re. epyllion.
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