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Ashes At My Feet

I walked through ashes on the floor... They fell from a heart burned and torn... It dropped like feathers from the air... From a soul that that only cared... I searched to find the one it owned... Only to find myself alone... Rebuilt this heart and put it back... And brought love to where it lacked... My world is now complete... No more ashes at my feet...

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/8/2012 2:16:00 PM

subtlely intense with much depth, michael... your words slay me, dear winner!...beautiful!:) hugggs

Dinda Minardi

Date: 2/8/2012 8:18:00 AM

Yes! your poems always about sweetness of introspection, dear Michael :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/7/2012 7:31:00 PM

words of true luv that found it's way to u Michael luv.. we all go thru fire and ashes before the rose blooms in full beauty.. amazing.. this one would be a great entry for Trampled Contest luv.. J.G. .. forever and always .. xoxoxoxoxo... will send u email for book luv.. thankxxx..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/7/2012 6:57:00 PM

VERY NICE. I like these ones from you that are so unique, SWEETIE PIE (that's from Lady GAGA!!)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/7/2012 2:22:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your work..I am sure that it is a very difficult to loose someone that one loves very much through either by choice or by death..You have penned the emotion very well in these couplets..Sara

Russell Sivey

Date: 2/7/2012 2:21:00 PM

I see you have suffered they pangs of life like us all here on the Soup! It sure stinks to have your heart burn to ashes! But to fix it back is together is truly a great feat! Now complete, awesome!! Great Work!!