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Ashes

I'm burning down The ashes fly I've lost my love She said goodbye Among the ruins My soul's aflame Lost and alone I cry her name Long dark night A living hell Will this heart heal Only time will tell

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Date: 3/15/2020 12:50:00 AM
Very very powerful
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 3/16/2020 5:13:00 PM
Thank you Simon!
Date: 3/2/2020 1:40:00 PM
Beautiful poem, Timothy.
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Date: 2/25/2020 5:05:00 PM
Hello Timothy … not too many recover fully from a loss, but time can help with some healing - thanks Timothy - Lindsay
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Date: 2/24/2020 6:02:00 PM
Beautifully expressed Timothy... Sending wishes for a fully healed heart filled with happiness anew!!
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 2/24/2020 7:29:00 PM
Thank you Kelly
Date: 2/22/2020 10:35:00 AM
Losing a loved one takes a long time to get over. Tom
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