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Ashamed of What I Did

"Each experience is locked within my heart and only I hold the key..." I’m still ashamed of what I did My only excuse is I was a kid Like most kids that were my age A Red Rider BB gun was the rage Loved the outdoors and plinking around A BB gun doesn’t make a big sound It’d be great if my gun could roar A shotgun boom, that’s a sound I adore I got an idea, how to make a boom I had a shot gun shell hid in my room I had cut off the end of that shot gun shell Used the shot in a sling shot, it worked well Even if a shell has lost its load If the cap gets a rap, it will explode So I stuck the shell in a big dirt bank Got forty feet away, gave my gun a crank Shot BB’s at the cap till blue in the face Couldn’t get any to hit the right place Finally one hit on the cap just right The shell went boom, oh what a fright I felt a sting, something hit my forehead I rubbed with my hand, it came back red That BB I shot came back and hit me Between the eyes, how lucky can you be? If it had taken that hit a little either way I’d probably be blind in one eye today “What Happened”, said Mom, my blood ran down Oh, I got stuck by a stick while running around Charles Sides A Fragment Of Life - Poetry Contest Oct 21. 2011

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Date: 8/28/2011 1:19:00 AM
PS it was funny what you told your mom. that is exactly what i would have done and never have regretted it either.
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Date: 8/28/2011 1:18:00 AM
this reminds me so much of that hilarious classic movie, A Christmas Story. Do you know it? the mother always saying: You'll shoot yourself in the eye. congrats on your win. One of the more entertaining ones on the winners' list!
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Date: 8/27/2011 7:55:00 PM
great poem plan to read it to my BB shooting son. Well done. Lee
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Date: 8/25/2011 2:52:00 PM
My brother my a beautiful hip shot and took a pigeon right out of the air. Mom made him eat it. So he cleaned and dressed it and fried it and ate it. Out of the four boys in our family, he is the only one to become a hunter as an adult. Tony
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Date: 8/25/2011 2:37:00 PM
A lile stays with us a long time doesn't it Charles. Great story though and congrats. Joyve
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Date: 8/25/2011 2:28:00 PM
Congrats on yor win! I remember doing the same thing when I was young.
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Date: 8/25/2011 2:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Constance's "A Fragment of Life" contest Charles. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/25/2011 12:16:00 PM
Cute one.What boys can't think of to do..Congrats on your win...Sara
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Date: 8/25/2011 11:06:00 AM
Congrats Charles on your exciting win with this excellent expression in poetry luv.. enjoy...
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Date: 8/25/2011 10:48:00 AM
It reminds me of some of the things I did. It's a wonder any of us survived. Congratulations
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Date: 8/25/2011 9:54:00 AM
hey Charles congrats on your win, lucky man, David
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Date: 7/26/2011 8:26:00 AM
It feels so good to be able to sit here and read your very creative writing this morning Charles. I do hope to come back soon and read more of your excellent work. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/25/2011 4:19:00 PM
haha, of course, the little white lies we tell our mum's, just so they don't have to find out what really happened. "uh well, there was this big massive tiger ye......." love this fun little piece
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